Hello there, there were some idle moments in eastern accent today, so I wrote a poem on a piece  
 of receipt paper. it's unpolished because it's the first draft, but i thought i would share it with anyone who 
 would want to read it anyway. give me your criticizms if you want. 
 And here it goes, 
 
 GAZING 
 Staring into the darkness of the night, 
 I felt the friendliness of the stars
 touching and caressing my heart, 
 as if they were understanding 
 the secrets , hidden within me. 
 When I was about to depart 
 from the quiet hill, 
 a lone star caught my attention. 
 It appeared more nervous
 than the rest of them, 
 as if it was longing to descend from the sky.
 I blew her a kiss, 
 as if to let her know that 
 she was remembered and that 
 there would be a way 
 for a hopeful star. "
 
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